Comments on: Landan’s Lie http://elephantwords.co.uk/2010/03/29/landans-lie/ One Image, Six Writers, Daily Words. The site about Interpretation, Inspiration and Improvisation. Fri, 10 Feb 2012 04:24:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Rivka Jacobs http://elephantwords.co.uk/2010/03/29/landans-lie/#comment-25410 Rivka Jacobs Thu, 15 Apr 2010 04:58:27 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=3834#comment-25410 Sorry for being slow to comment. I understand completely about having a big story to tell in a small space, but I think you handled that expertly. An opening sentence, then 2 paragraphs. If we didn't know about the picture, this short-short would be more eerie, I think. It's very subtle; the reader isn't really sure if Landan is the problem or not, or what he actually looks like, or why he has been isolated with a computer generated companion. Sorry for being slow to comment. I understand completely about having a big story to tell in a small space, but I think you handled that expertly. An opening sentence, then 2 paragraphs.

If we didn’t know about the picture, this short-short would be more eerie, I think. It’s very subtle; the reader isn’t really sure if Landan is the problem or not, or what he actually looks like, or why he has been isolated with a computer generated companion.

]]> By: chrissasterling http://elephantwords.co.uk/2010/03/29/landans-lie/#comment-25118 chrissasterling Sun, 04 Apr 2010 23:56:04 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=3834#comment-25118 I know. I felt very badly for him, because he has no idea of who he is nor does he realize how hugely important he is. His entire story was so massive in my head that I had no idea how to write it in a short/small way, so it came out short and confusing, which I regret. Thanks for reading it :) I know. I felt very badly for him, because he has no idea of who he is nor does he realize how hugely important he is.

His entire story was so massive in my head that I had no idea how to write it in a short/small way, so it came out short and confusing, which I regret.

Thanks for reading it :)

]]> By: Bridgeen Gillespie http://elephantwords.co.uk/2010/03/29/landans-lie/#comment-24797 Bridgeen Gillespie Fri, 02 Apr 2010 00:33:49 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=3834#comment-24797 Aw no! Poor wolfie kid with nothing but an animatronic face for a friend. Weirdly makes me think of the original series of First born. Sad and creepy at the same time. Aw no! Poor wolfie kid with nothing but an animatronic face for a friend. Weirdly makes me think of the original series of First born. Sad and creepy at the same time.

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