Arabelle and Nixie

Contributed by on 12/02/10

Once upon a time, on the edge of a low cliff, just outside of a little village by the sea there was a woman who lived in a small cottage. Her name was Arabelle, which means ‘beautiful eagle’ and though she had lived for many years in the same place, and though many handsome men asked for her hand, she had never married nor had children of her own.

But Arabelle loved her life in her cottage by the sea. She grew vegetables for herself in her small garden and taught music and reading to the children of the nearby villagers in exchange for the things that she couldn’t grow or make herself. And each day she would rise with the sun and dance down the moss-covered path, where she would kick off her golden slippers and leap the final few feet to the beach to run barefoot through the sand. And my, how she ran! Her long hair would shine in the morning light and her gown would trail out behind her like the wings of an angel!

One morning when she returned from her run, her face flushed, her eyes full of joy, and her slippers in her hand, she found that she had company. For there, sitting on the old rocking chair by the rose bush was a slender figure no more than eighteen inches tall, with skin that shimmied like a waterfall. And this figure wore a look of such love and hope on her face that Arabelle knew that whatever help she might ask of her, she would be honoured to give freely.

“Good morning Arabelle,” said the stranger with a song in her voice, “How did you enjoy your run this morning? Isn’t it a magnificent day?”

“Good morning honoured guest,” replied Arabelle “It is a beautiful day to be sure. Would you care to take some tea? I have been drying some leaves and they should be perfect now.”

The water sprite (for that’s what the strange creature was) told Arabelle she would be honoured to taste some of her tea, and the two beautiful strangers spent the morning in each others company, laughing and exchanging news from far and near, for although the water sprite had been born nearby, she had been travelling in distant lands for many years. And as the sun passed its peak and the evening began to draw in, the two became hungry and the water sprite offered to provide supper.

With the fresh fish grilling over an open fire, Nixie (for that was the water sprite’s name) began to explain the purpose of her visit.

“Many years ago,” she begun “I visited your mother like this and we shared a day together from the rising of the sun til its setting that evening. She was as beautiful as you are, and just as kind and patient. For you see, I am a water sprite, do you know what that is?”

Arabelle admitted that she didn’t and Nixie explained that most of the time, a water sprite was unable to walk on the ground or eat food and drink tea, or even laugh because if you laugh underwater even a water sprite can drown. But when the stars lined up a certain way, which didn’t happen often, they were able to leave the water and spend a day amongst people.

When this rare day came, Nixie liked to spend it in good company and as a thank-you, she would give a magical gift to the kind person who had generously shared their life with her.

“Well what a beautiful story!” Exclaimed Arabelle, for she loved gifts and had begun to get excited by what the sprite was suggesting. “And are you truly a water sprite?”

Nixie smiled at Arabelle and so wide and infectious was her mood, it was as if the sun had climbed higher into the sky.

“Before I ask what you desire, I wanted to tell you something about your mother, for I knew your mother before you were born. She and your father had been hoping for a child for many years and when I visited them, they had only just discovered that you would be arriving. They were as generous with me then as you have been today, sharing what little they owned with me and opening their hearts and telling me their dreams. She loved you with such fire even before you arrived.”

As her guest talked about her parents, Arabelle’s breath caught in her throat for it had been many years since they had died. Nixie held her hand softly and asked if she could imagine what her mother asked for as a gift.

“She asked me, like you did earlier, if I was truly a magical being. Do you believe me Arabelle?”

“There is no doubt in my heart that you are the most magical being I have ever met! But please, tell me, what did she ask for herself?”

“I could have granted her wealth or a long life or many beautiful children but she asked nothing for herself. Your mother had a touch of magic in her veins herself, did you know that? She knew that she would not live to be an old woman and that her daughter (for she knew you were to be a girl) would live alone for much of her life.

So when I offered her a gift, she asked me for a pair of golden slippers that would fit her daughter when she was fully grown. And she asked me to bless the slippers so that you would walk lightly and always have a dance in your step and love in your heart.

And now, before the sun sets it’s time for me to grant your gift. What would you ask from me?”

With her eyes full of sunshine and tears, Arabelle returned the beautiful stranger’s smile and asked for new soles for her golden slippers.

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19 comments so far

  1. I don’t know if it’s just because I’ve been re-reading ‘American Gods’ but somehow I picked what was going to happen from the first couple of sentences. This reads like a traditional UK fairytale – very nicely done, George.

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    Thanks Simon. When Ian stole my song idea, I kept coming back to the idea of a fairy tale so am really glad it came across.

    (Also, that’s pretty impressive as I didn’t know at that point where it was going at all!)

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  2. What a delightful tale!
    I too, when I saw the image, thought of a faerie tale…LOL…and this one is first rate! It has it’s own touch of magick!
    And, Arabelle’s wish, though thoroughly in character and logical, took me totally by surprise!
    I love it!
    good work, young human…
    Paty

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    Thank you Paty!

    I’m really glad the surprise was there. I kept getting pulled by the gods-of-fairy-tales-past to make her wish for a husband and children to make her life complete, but it just felt like the sort of happy ending I wouldn’t want to indoctrinate any daughter of mine with!

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    Tut, FEMINIST! ;)

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  3. Yery nice Blog.

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    Very nice fitness.

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    Damn straight, we engage with our spam round these parts. Keeping the dream alive, and all that.

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  4. Wasser ist für den Muskelaufbau von allen Tieren Notwendig. Deshelp spenden wie vom Muskelaufbau Team.

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    And for those non-German speakers amongst you, I asked Google to translate for you;

    “Water is necessary for the muscle of all animals. Deshelp donation from the muscle as a team.”

    So yeah, there you have it!

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  5. This is so, so lovely George! I actually welled up a little. I wasn’t expecting the wish, which seemed like a perfectly sensible one. Oh I don’t know what to say, jus lovely. Think you’ve made my day.x

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    Thank you Bridgeen! I’ve been watching a lot of Dexter the past few weeks and must admit to being pulled towards writing a bloody death or missing person crime-noir type piece, but I really didn’t want to!

    Really glad it rang the right bell for so many readers this week – it wasn’t easy to write and took twice as long as I’d expected, so that really validates the effort for me.

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  6. I loved this George. So sweet. Your fairytale makes me me wish I had a daughter to whom I might read it. :) xoxo.

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    For once, ‘sweet’ is exactly the right tone I think. I’ve been looking at fairy tales in a new light recently and want to go back and re-read all the stories from my childhood – I bought the complete Grimm and Hans Christian Andersen last year (and Aesop and Arabian Nights) but have yet to open all but the last of them.

    Thanks for your comment and thanks for coming over!

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  7. I agree with all the comments above. A great modern fairy-tale. Beautifully written. I also teared-up when I read about Arabelle’s mother’s wish.

    I also like the idea of immortal beings, finding certain places or families that they visit every so often, like old friends.

    You write such strong female characters, George! Arabelle seems like such a remarkable and wonderful person, and you make the case for her, and for why the water sprite Nixie would feel safe and treasured in her presence.

    I also love how you utilizied a little-used character from ancient mythologies and folk tales, the water sprite. In the 19th century, water-sprites were popular in books and operas. I guess they are the descendants of the naiads or water nymphs of ancient Greek mythology. But every culture and people in the world has some belief of small beings who live in the trees and water, whatever they call them. I haven’t seen too many modern stories focus on them. So bravo for originality, as well as bravo for telling a moving and delightful tale.

    I almost want to say “Thank you,” for giving us this wonderful story!

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    Thanks Rivka!

    As we’ve discussed before I felt I needed names for this (although fairy tales often don’t use them) and took your advice on using baby names website to find them.

    I recently visited the brewery in Essen, Germany where one lady gave the Grimm Brothers something like 70% of the stories they collected in one of their volumes. So, being aware of the Germanic heritage of most of our fairy tales (and the characters’ names), I looked at a German Baby Name site.

    I found ‘Arabelle’ quickly and thought that the idea of the name meaning ‘eagle’ might lead my story somewhere, and though it didn’t directly, it did plant a nice red herring I thought. Then I found ‘Nixie’ which means ‘Water Sprite’ and so I absolutely had to use that! And by that point, half the story had been written for me.

    I don’t know whether Water Sprites in German folklore were a freshwater deity (and possibly nothing to do with the sea) but I beg artistic licence on that and take the opportunity to say thank YOU for planting a seed for me.

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    I hadn’t ever considered that I was writing strong female characters, I’m not sure why that happens except maybe I guess I find females more interesting!

    There have been pieces I’ve written in the past (including at least one of my prior EWs) where the characters’ genders and relationships were not spelled out, and yet the feedback/comments I received seem to have assumed a romantic (and heterosexual) relationship. I was actually wondering this weekend whether that says more about most people’s assumptions, or whether I write with a ‘male’ voice and am actually directing that.

    The interaction of immortals with the rest of us is something I had the seed of an idea for, for a previous image and I think I may return to.

    Thanks again!

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  8. Thoughts

    There were a few things I hoped to achieve with this piece and I’ll try and break down my thinking below…

    Firstly I was struck a while ago that there are several elements that keep recurring in our EW pieces; a dozen or so shortcuts and tricks and safe-grounds that we use to get the creative juices flowing. I don’t mean that as a criticism as I think they’ve been working well for everyone and I hope I never grow to take the high standard of writing on this site for granted!

    None of these are easy genres to write within, but in the constraints that we have, they provide some boundaries and common ground-rules that we all understand, and make it that bit easier to set up the framework for a short story. I’ve repeatedly seen stories here that sit inside the science fiction, paranormal, crime/noir genres or are slices of relationships, and when the idea came to me for fairy tales, I thought it would make a welcome addition to that list! I’d actually love to see a week-long ‘special edition’ Elephant Words where we all have to write fairy tales!

    I also felt that within the ‘short story’ field, we tend to work on the assumption that we’re unable to tell a complete story, so instead we write one chapter or a slice of a bigger story which, although it stands alone as a great piece, always leaves some ends untied or some background unsaid. I actually love the freedom this gives when writing short pieces, and love the way it sets the readers’ imagination aflame as they have so much that hasn’t been spelled out for them.

    Having said that, I wanted to try and write a ‘complete’ piece with background and a finale, and the Fairy Tale or Folklore tale seem to me to be genres which tend to do this. I hope I managed it to some degree here and will definitely be writing more at some point. It’s even possible that Arabelle’s slippers will be passed on to somebody else one day…

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    This is a lovely piece, George – feels like you thought hard about what you wanted to do, and it must feel pretty good that you nailed it!

    We’ve talked a little about these writerly shortcuts in private, and I agree entirely with you. I think the fairy tale is something that recurs, though, but probably not as often as the other tropes you mentioned. Certainly, while I haven’t written straight-up fairy-tales like this one, I know I’ve visited that sort of rustic ideal and fantastical setting before!

    Having known you all of our lives, it still kind of shocks me when you write something like this – I expected the quality, but the breadth of subject matter has consistently surprised me!

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