The Project

Contributed by on 05/02/10

Lita turned the corner onto Mission Street. One hand clutched the lapels of her trench coat closed – her useless attempt to block out the wind. The other fingered the car keys in her pocket. She’d parked her silver Saab two blocks away and walked the rest. It wasn’t necessary. Anyone she knew wouldn’t set foot on Mission Street and definitely not at 10 p.m. on a school night. Lita wouldn’t be running into anyone from her garden club or Langston Ladies Who Lunch group. But still, considering everything, it was better to be cautious.

She came upon Mission Bar faster than she’d expected. Nerves had added extra fire to her steps. It was located right where he’d directed; dead center of the block, hugged on either side by a pawn shop and jewelry store that looked as though they had gone out of business.

“The bar behind bars.”

It was a silly thing to say, especially aloud, with no one around and Lita giggled as soon as the words left her mouth. The giggles, too, were a side effect of nerves. The bar’s moniker was spelled out in light bulbs across its only window and lit in red from below. The window, and the black steel door, was behind wrought iron bars. Lita hoped they weren’t a sign of things to come and went inside.

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“What I like to do is, get a schedule. I like to know where the project goes every day. If the project eats lunch at the little Greek deli on the corner every Thursday, I need to know. If the project hits the gym every day after work, I need to know. If the project is screwing his secretary every Tuesday and Friday on his lunch break, I need to know.”

He kept referring to her husband as “the project” and for some reason, this annoyed Lita.

“You know, his name is…”

“I know what his name is.”

Blue eyes met her brown eyes and she knew better than to argue further.

“Well, Ti…the project… does go to the gym, but not every day. Monday and Wednesday he plays racquetball at The Phoenix Club. He runs at a track near the house every morning. Around 5 a.m. For about an hour. Um… oh, the third Friday of every month he plays poker at his boss’ house. Shouldn’t you write this down or something?”

“I told you. Nothing in writing. I got it. Keep going.”

Before she could continue their waitress returned.

“Can I freshen that up for ya?”

Lita had ordered a club soda and it remained untouched on the wooden table tagged by previous patrons with delightful phrases like “Fuck Da World” and “Pussy Eater.” The waitress wasn’t talking to her. She had her heavily-lined eyes on him and his empty glass. He nodded and the waitress sashayed away to get another of whatever he’d ordered before Lita arrived.

The bar was relatively empty. Two men sat at the bar drinking and talking quietly. A couple that looked barely old enough to be in a bar and out past sundown whispered over their drinks. It seemed as if everyone were plotting. The air was thick with cigarette smoke and secrets. The perfect place to plan killing my husband, Lita thought.

Well, not Lita directly. The actual act would be carried out by her companion. She watched him as he watched the waitress. He could have been straight out of central casting if the role called for a math teacher. Close haircut, clean shaven, with wire-rimmed glasses, he reminded Lita of her pharmacist.

“You know, this wouldn’t be necessary except that if we divorce I get nothing. Nothing. And…”

“You don’t have to explain because I really don’t care. “

Lita wanted to explain. For some reason, she wanted this man who killed for money to know that she had been backed into a corner, her options taken from her almost the moment she’d said, “I do.” A divorce would leave her with nothing because she’d signed things back when she was young and in love. It would be a lot simpler if he just died. But 45-year-old men that ran, played racquetball, and monitored their cholesterol level like most men followed football scores, didn’t just die.

“The schedule. Is that everything?”

“What? Oh. Yes. I think so. Wait. No. He also goes to Jeremy’s soccer games every Sunday afternoon.”

“Your son?”

“His son.”

His son. The one kink in her plan. He was fifteen and with her husband gone, she’d be stuck raising the little snot for another three years at least. He had nowhere to go. Lita supposed it was a small inconvenience considering how much money she stood to gain.

He was watching her from across the table. Lost in thought, she absently traced one of the words carved into the table top with her finger.

“Do I need to take care of him as well?”

Lita stopped tracing and met his gaze. Her lips formed a flash of a smile before she remembered that she should probably look thoroughly outraged, repulsed, or offended. Then she remembered his words from a few moments before and allowed the smile to remain.

I really don’t care.

It was like discovering that your very expensive department store purchase came with a free gift bag, she thought.

“Of course, it would be extra.”

Well, maybe not free.

“How much extra?”

“Half the original fee.”

Lita didn’t have it. She’d been squirreling away money for months just to afford his fee for the first… project. To come up with the rest, she’d have to sell something, or several things, quickly. Something that wouldn’t be missed. Perhaps, jewelry?

Still watching her he said, “Don’t worry about it. You have a little time to make up your mind.”

“When would you, uh, complete the project?”

The waitress returned with his drink. They remained quiet as she placed it in front of him.

“Anything else I can do for ya?”

Without looking at her, he shook his head. She left with a little less sass in her sashay.

“I’ve found, in my experience, that it’s best you don’t know. It lends credibility if your shock seems genuine.”

In his experience. Of course, he’d done it before. It’s how Lita had found him. Fellow Langston Country Club member, and neighbor, Helen Styles was currently on her second world cruise since her husband had “just died.”

He continued. “If you’re sure you’d like to proceed, we’ll meet once more for payment. And then you won’t see me ever again.”

This made sense to Lita. After the job was done, any scenario that involved them meeting again could only be bad… for her.

“Do you still have the prepaid phone I told you to get?”

She nodded.

“Good. I’ll be in touch. Have the money before I call. Cash.”

He finished his drink in one gulp and left the table. Lita watched him walk to the exit without acknowledging anyone he passed. He seemed more out of place than she in his tweed jacket and faded jeans.

Lita prepared to leave; wrapping her dark tresses in the silk scarf she hoped would make her unrecognizable. She’d considered dark sunglasses, but decided it would be overkill. She slipped on the trench coat, reaching into her pocket for cash to pay the tab.

“Don’t bother. He paid before you got here. Tip and all.” The waitress began to clear the table.

Of course he had, Lita thought.

***

Lita retraced her steps back to the car. The whole way she made plans. She spent money she didn’t yet have and relished in the freedom she saw just at her fingertips. She’d keep the cell phone on her at all times and fill her schedule with as many engagements as she could over the next few weeks. She wanted to have viable alibis just in case.

She also made plans to return to Mission Street. Next time, though, she’d visit the pawn shop and see if she couldn’t raise the fifty percent.

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24 comments so far

  1. That was fantastic, Nina! Best work yet!

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    Thanks, Soph-Dawg!

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  2. Loved it, Nina!

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  3. Loved it, Nina!!

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    Kim! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I’m glad you liked it.

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  4. Whoa! Awesome story! I don’t know quite how to take the plot, because part of me sort of wants her to get away with it, and the other part of me is like, “No, it’s murder, must not enjoy Nita’s triumph so much!”

    Technically, very well written. I like how you describe every-day things in different ways, that make them seen fresh. I like how you interchanged thought and action during the dialog between Mr. Tweed Jacket and Nita; that sense of power Nita started to feel, was palpable. “Do I need to take care of him as well?” Oh my, I shouldn’t enjoy that so much. But I do.

    Like the best crime stories, like all those great stories I used to read in the “Alfred Hitchcock Magazine,” your story has just a touch of humor, a sense of humanity, a bit of Noir.

    I’m blown away. Great first story for Elephant Words!

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    Rivka, thank you! Needless to say I was very nervous to post my first attempt.

    The picture George chose made it easy though. I looked at it and thought, “Yeah, that’s where you go to plan bad things.”

    I’ve yet to read the other entries for the week because I wanted to post mine first and not be influenced. I’m headed to do that now.

    Thanks again for the support and encouragement. As a writer, I know you know how much that means.

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  5. “It was a silly thing to say, especially aloud, with no one around and Lita giggled as soon as the words left her mouth.”

    “Lost in thought, she absently traced one of the words carved into the table top with her finger.”

    I like the way you phrase the minutia of every day actions. It serves to bring a bit of humanity to the words on the page. Humanity, in that, these are recognizable acts in which the readers can see themselves and it makes it easier to be in the story rather than just reading it.

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  6. Dang you and you always pulling me in……no, I mean it! lol

    I enjoyed the read.

    I especially like the way the thoughts are pretty much all right there at the surface…

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  7. Why are you afraid of the Alegra? This is good stuff.

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  8. I always like your fiction, but this is one of the best I’ve read. You have such a way of pulling the reader in.

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  9. Beautifully written as always. Just the right inflection, so that it felt real. It read almost autobiographically because it was just so seamless.

    You know I’m one of your biggest champions, even if it takes me a while to come lavish you with the praise you SO very obviously deserve.

    I am proud to be your literary peer. Thank you for doing the craft justice. :)

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  10. You know I’m one of your biggest champions, even if it takes me a while to come lavish you with the praise you SO very obviously deserve.

    Beautifully written as always. Just the right inflection, so that it felt real. It read almost autobiographically because it was just so seamless.

    I am proud to be your literary peer. Thank you for doing the craft justice. :)

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  11. Are you that good or are you planning to off me for my life insurance.

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    Both.

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  12. Nina, if you ever get the chance, see if you can find an old-ish book of Frederick Forsyth shorts called ‘No Comebacks’. I have a feeling you’d like the title story as much as I liked this!

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  13. Lots of fun Nina! And i totally agree with Rikva’s comments! lol, couldn’t out it better myself.

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  14. I enjoyed that very, very much. I didn’t expect to get drawn in and I didn’t expect to enjoy the twist – it’s difficult to get that right in short fiction. You did. Good stuff.

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  15. Heh, nasty… Very tight little piece of…what, suburban noir?

    Great first piece, Nina. Absolutely nothing to be nervous about!

    (Also, tons of comments! Always nice to see!)

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  16. So. Finally getting around to comment (not that this page is short of comments already!) and my thoughts pretty much echo Nick’s and everyone else’s – a strong and confident first elephant.

    Reading again, I’m reminded of my first impressions of the piece; I was particularly impressed with your minimal physical descriptions of our conspirators – I didn’t realise I knew nothing about their physicality until the “blue eyes met her brown eyes” line, all you really gave us to there was her name hinting at an ethnicity at least and then you ease other clues through until you give us a straight-out description of the Project Manager. That pharmacist line was perfect by the way.

    My only criticism would be that you weren’t as soft-handed when you were establishing Lita as a ‘lady who lunches’. Those references in the first para felt a little clumsy and shoe-horned in – especially because they’re in the very early part when the reader is settling in and looking consciously for any directions from the writer as to where this is heading. I felt the Saab reference, ‘racquetball at The Phoenix Club’ and ‘Langston Country Club member’ later on were nice, subtle confirmations and you could have found other similar flags. Setting the scene so quickly as you need to do in such a short piece is one of the things I struggle with, so I’m probably overly harsh on a first paragraph wherever I read it!

    Loved the nervous giggles and the veiled reference to prison bars, the crudeness of the tabletop graffiti was perfect and the twist of the kid was lovely, pushing her firmly into the ‘evil’ category for me as his death wasn’t strictly necessary for her plans, just another sign that she’s the kind of person who goes for the heated leather seat option if it’s offered to her.

    Welcome!

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    George, yes, I wasn’t sure exactly how long it was going to be and though we weren’t given restraints, I didn’t want it to be TOO long. With more time, I might have gradually placed those things in here and there, but I wanted to tell the reader straight up and right away who she was… on the outside.

    Speaking of the crudeness of the tabletop, “Pussy Eater” made me laugh out loud when I wrote it. :-)

    Thanks for the feedback, babe!

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    I wrote ‘fuckmuffin’ coming out of somebody’s mouth a few weeks ago and I reacted the same way when I wrote it. Nick pulled me up on it and I felt I had to justify it.

    And I hear you on telling us right away – I may not have felt the contrast with the neighbourhood in the same way and you wanted to set the scene.

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  17. I always have the same reaction as I did the first time I read something you wrote. “Dis she really write this?” I love it. Sorry to see that it’s over.

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  18. I loved it. I never want your stories to end.

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