The Poets of Mars
The Mission Bar was one of the most notorious drinking establishments on Mars. It was also one of the oldest. Sitting in the shadow of Olympus Mons, it had been built by the first settlers, back when Mars was a staging post, the next step on from the Moon to the rest of the Solar System. In those days the pilots and crew of the star ships heading out to explore the outer planets would gather in the bar the night before their missions were due to leave and have one last drink together. Over time the facility grew, more people were needed to run it, and they had families. Service industries began to spring up around the base as pioneering business men sought to meet their needs, and in time the base became a town. That town had since become a city, and other cities had sprung up across the planet as the human race had begun to spread throughout the Solar System, just as it had spread across the Earth centuries before. Now there were colonies on every planet, from Mercury to Eris, no matter how inhospitable they seemed. If there was money to be made, resources to be mined, there were people there. Even if there was nothing of value, you could often find a small community of people who saw the remoteness as being something valuable in and of itself, often for political or religious reasons.
There was little left of that first bar, it had been extended and refurbished so many times in the years since it had been built, and few knew its heritage or the reason for its name. They just knew that it was a great place to go if you wanted to disappear into a quiet corner and slowly drink yourself into oblivion. You see, Mars, for all of its opportunity, for all of its reputation for being a gateway to the Universe, was a place that people often got stuck.
People would spend their whole lives scrimping and saving to buy a ticket to Mars. They’d tell themselves that once they got there, they’d find a job and earn the money to buy passage on a ship to one of the other planets. Some did, many never made it. All their money would go on just getting by, and the occasional night at places like the Mission Bar. They’d drink to forget the daily grind, and reminisce about the blue skies and green fields back on Earth.
The bright red neon sign outside the bar flickered as Sam walked through the door. He sat down at the bar and ordered a shot of whisky. He was young, in his early twenties, with a fresh face and a shock of blond hair on his head. He was wearing coveralls, undone to his waist, revealing a red check shirt underneath; his heavy work boots caked in red dust. His hair was matted with sweat and his face was stained with oil and grease.
“Hey, kid,” the bar tender offered him a warm smile, “I ain’t seen you around here, where ya’ headed?”
Everyone was headed somewhere, no matter how long they’d been on Mars, no one was ever just there.
“I’m on my way to the artist’s colony on Ceres,” Sam replied, “I’m a poet.”
“A poet, eh?” The bartender smiled. “So’s Jim over there. Steve’s a sculptor. An’ old Herb, over there, he’s writin’ a novel.” He indicated a succession of dishevelled, drunken men as he spoke. Sam looked them all over and his heart sank a little bit.
“What happened to them?” he asked.
The bartender looked him square in the eye, and simply said, “Mars.”
georgelondon
Love it! I saw a space-station bar in that image too – and a deadbeat, back-alley kind of place at that. I still don’t understand exactly why but it’s weird and reassuring that somebody else did! Also means I can drop that idea as you’ve done a much better job than I would. I love the idea of a whole world that sprung up around it, like towns built up around a highway inn – the kind of place that’s an invisible part of a million stories but never has its own story told.
I think there are bigger stories to be told around these characters and this place, and possibly a more tightly-toned version of this one, but even as it stands right now I loved the way you ran with it. Great to have you here for another six-er.
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iansharman
Thanks, George! I have to agree that I think there is a bigger story here. I’ve been thinking about that since I wrote it; I definitely think I’ll be returning to Sam and the Mission Bar.
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georgelondon
Yup! File it under [revisit].
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Nicolas Papaconstantinou
Great sense of place to this, Ian… the history you give it is quite an effortless read, too – the main reason I don’t read an awful lot of science-fiction is that I don’t have a high tolerance for the really literal school of world-building, and you manage to work up a solid history without going into too much detail, which is great!
That final line is a kick in the gut, too.
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Rivka Jacobs
An excellent, wonderful science-fiction short.
Evocative and moving, and realistic. As Nick says, extremely readable.
I especially like how you tell the story without a lot of real-science details, which are there and have to be observed by the writer, but not on display. You are concentrating on the human factor. Nick calls them the “world building” details, which are de-rigueur for most hard science fiction these days, mostly because with computer world-building software, they are so easy to produce. But like STAR WARS and BATTLESTAR GALACTICA and other great scifi dramas, all that is pushed to the background so as to focus on exploring how people deal with this new frontier.
I love the idea itself: that even in the future people will dream and yearn and aspire but life will hit them hard, and dreams will be battered, but not shattered or destroyed.
On the psychological level, there is a sense of melancholy that pervades the story, and the reader is left to ask, are these dreamers stuck in the Mission Bar in denial, or heroes who never give up their dreams?
Maybe your best story ever on Elephant Words.
And as George said, the characters are immediately likable. I do hope you will revisit Sam and the Mission Bar on Mars in another story.
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Simon
There’s a track by a group called Pepe Deluxe called ‘Captain Carter’s Fathomas’ about an almost Western-sounding narrator who dwells on Mars. It would make a perfect soundtrack to this.
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georgelondon
Listening now! (And loving Spotify more day-by-day.)
Captain Carter’s Fathoms: http://open.spotify.com/track/0gz6V4vWfUSLDMWIDUCd5v
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