Comments on: True Story http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/31/true-story/ One Image, Six Writers, Daily Words. The site about Interpretation, Inspiration and Improvisation. Thu, 24 May 2012 07:53:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: عرب سوفت http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/31/true-story/#comment-21210 عرب سوفت Tue, 22 Dec 2009 09:04:14 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1323#comment-21210 well, dear i wouldn't recommended you waiting em for nothing , i'd continue coz it's so simple, i'm talking like i'm you , it's ma future nothing gonna stop me or hold me back to achieve what i want since it's a true story like wt u said , well i hope u get wt i meant and sorry for ma English good luck . and btw i like comic so much , actually i'd like to be a comic writer someday. good luck again well, dear i wouldn’t recommended you waiting em for nothing , i’d continue coz it’s so simple, i’m talking like i’m you , it’s ma future nothing gonna stop me or hold me back to achieve what i want since it’s a true story like wt u said , well i hope u get wt i meant and sorry for ma English good luck .
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btw i like comic so much , actually i’d like to be a comic writer someday.
good luck again

]]> By: David Baillie http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/31/true-story/#comment-11437 David Baillie Tue, 03 Feb 2009 01:21:42 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1323#comment-11437 Hey wee B - this really moved me. I want to go and see the van. But you're wring on one thing - you're too cool and interesting a person to 'tread water'. Hey wee B – this really moved me.
I want to go and see the van.

But you’re wring on one thing – you’re too cool and interesting a person to ‘tread water’.

]]> By: Nicolas Papaconstantinou http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/31/true-story/#comment-11408 Nicolas Papaconstantinou Mon, 02 Feb 2009 10:56:55 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1323#comment-11408 Aww, man! Some intricate themes and cool work going on in this - and the confessional tone to it is a brave and slightly heartbreaking one. I like the way you tied together the whole van thing in the last passage, and there are nice moments throughout, though there were a couple of points where my brain tricked me into thinking it was more complicated then it was, and I don't know if that was unavoidable, or something that could be clarified with different formatting. If it's a true story, it was good to hear a bit more about the van in the picture! Aww, man!

Some intricate themes and cool work going on in this – and the confessional tone to it is a brave and slightly heartbreaking one.

I like the way you tied together the whole van thing in the last passage, and there are nice moments throughout, though there were a couple of points where my brain tricked me into thinking it was more complicated then it was, and I don’t know if that was unavoidable, or something that could be clarified with different formatting.

If it’s a true story, it was good to hear a bit more about the van in the picture!

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