Comments on: Obsidian http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/ One Image, Six Writers, Daily Words. The site about Interpretation, Inspiration and Improvisation. Fri, 10 Feb 2012 04:24:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: David Baillie http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10851 David Baillie Fri, 16 Jan 2009 17:13:05 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10851 Bridgeen! You didn't tell me you were joining in! Great first story by the way. Bridgeen! You didn’t tell me you were joining in!

Great first story by the way.

]]> By: georgelondon http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10823 georgelondon Thu, 15 Jan 2009 18:33:19 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10823 Nicely done. Welcome! Nicely done. Welcome!

]]> By: Nicolas Papaconstantinou http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10774 Nicolas Papaconstantinou Wed, 14 Jan 2009 10:11:30 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10774 Oh, nice! I love the variance between short burst sentences and longer passages - it gives the piece a really cool voice that is strangely pleasing and disjointed... Which I think is the plan. You've taken an on the surface straight-forward event, and infused it all with a creeping sense of alienation and tiny comforts. A solid first piece! Oh, nice!

I love the variance between short burst sentences and longer passages – it gives the piece a really cool voice that is strangely pleasing and disjointed…

Which I think is the plan. You’ve taken an on the surface straight-forward event, and infused it all with a creeping sense of alienation and tiny comforts.

A solid first piece!

]]> By: Bridgeen Gillespie http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10764 Bridgeen Gillespie Tue, 13 Jan 2009 20:29:12 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10764 Aw thanks guys. That was very encouraging :-) Aw thanks guys. That was very encouraging :-)

]]> By: Matthew Hartwell http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10760 Matthew Hartwell Tue, 13 Jan 2009 16:40:26 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10760 Welcome! An extremely enjoyable piece of work! An excellent beginning that gives us a fantastic sense of character that then transitions right into her heart and slowly cuts it out in front of us. :) Welcome! An extremely enjoyable piece of work!

An excellent beginning that gives us a fantastic sense of character that then transitions right into her heart and slowly cuts it out in front of us. :)

]]> By: Rol http://elephantwords.co.uk/2009/01/13/obsidian/#comment-10756 Rol Tue, 13 Jan 2009 15:36:54 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=1242#comment-10756 Nice work, Bridgeen - an immediately affecting story with a nice warm smile at the end. A strong debut! Nice work, Bridgeen – an immediately affecting story with a nice warm smile at the end. A strong debut!

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