Comments on: At the Docks (an excerpt from an as-yet-unwritten story) http://elephantwords.co.uk/2008/08/27/at-the-docks-an-excerpt-from-an-as-yet-unwritten-story/ One Image, Six Writers, Daily Words. The site about Interpretation, Inspiration and Improvisation. Wed, 23 May 2012 21:00:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Xander Bennett http://elephantwords.co.uk/2008/08/27/at-the-docks-an-excerpt-from-an-as-yet-unwritten-story/#comment-4882 Xander Bennett Thu, 28 Aug 2008 23:04:18 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=598#comment-4882 Nice one. This is a faster-paced story for you. Definitely a lot of interesting loose threads in there (Cindy, the package), but it works. Nice one. This is a faster-paced story for you. Definitely a lot of interesting loose threads in there (Cindy, the package), but it works.

]]> By: Chris Beckett http://elephantwords.co.uk/2008/08/27/at-the-docks-an-excerpt-from-an-as-yet-unwritten-story/#comment-4818 Chris Beckett Wed, 27 Aug 2008 11:34:07 +0000 http://elephantwords.co.uk/?p=598#comment-4818 I had another story planned for the image, a legacy story, fathers and sons, rebellious teens, all that. But it didn't feel right. So, I sat down, looked at the picture, envisioned a guy living in a room above the meat market, and went from there. This is what came out, all first draft with a soft polish before publishing it. This being a unique writing site, I hope it works, and maybe someday I'll get around to finding out what happened to the package. I had another story planned for the image, a legacy story, fathers and sons, rebellious teens, all that. But it didn’t feel right.

So, I sat down, looked at the picture, envisioned a guy living in a room above the meat market, and went from there. This is what came out, all first draft with a soft polish before publishing it. This being a unique writing site, I hope it works, and maybe someday I’ll get around to finding out what happened to the package.

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